雅思写作高分短语

2024-06-15

雅思写作高分短语(共9篇)

雅思写作高分短语 篇1

下面是我搜集的雅思写作中关于旅游的高分词汇短语:

1、旅游景点 tourist attractions/tourist spots/places of interest

开阔眼界 push back/expand one’s vision/horizons

游客与当地人的互动 tourists can interact with the locals

促进文化交流 promote cultural communication

吸引 draw/attract/appeal to(vts)/be a magnet for somebody

亲身体验(n)first-hand experience

多种感官体验的(如听觉,触觉等)multi-sensory(adj)

相互了解 mutual understanding

2、把游客和当地人隔离 seclude/isolate(vts)the tourist from the locals

商业化 commercialise/commodity(vts)

欺骗游客的手段 tourist traps

冲突 conflict(n,vi+with)

争端(n)discord/dissension

间接体验(如通过电视或互联网n)srcond-hand experience/vicarience experience

文化遗产 cultural heritage

雅思写作高分短语 篇2

一、注重审题

高考作文主要是提供一定的素材,要求学生以材料为基础,对材料进行综合、说明,并对某一问题、某一事件阐明自己的看法、态度。学生在动笔之前,对作文要点的把握,对文章的逻辑结构,对语言的运用,应该有一个清醒的思路。特别是对图表型、图画型题材的文章,更应该认真审题,找出文章的要点。因为评卷的一个很关键的因素就是文章是否涵盖题目所提供的要点。根据评分标准,对遗漏要点的扣分标准是相当严格的。另外,在审题时,切忌偏题离题,东拉西扯,不得要领,也忌重复冗繁,条理不清,重点不突出。从以往的阅卷情况看,有相当一部分考生在动笔之前不认真思考,写完之后,才发现要点遗漏、文章结构安排不合理、字数超标等问题。

二、语句准确,句式多化

要尽可能多地运用比较熟悉的词组、短语、句式,确保文章通顺流畅,切忌写出中文式的英语。在用词上,要尽量做到具体形象,避免抽象化、单一化。学生要在使用动词、非谓语动词、副词、介词及词语活用上下工夫。

在句法上,要尽量避免句式的单一化,同样意思的内容,能够运用比较复杂的句式结构来表达,在作文中可以使用较复杂的定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句等,适当运用非谓语动词作定语或状语,巧用with复合结构、倒装句、感叹句、强调句、虚拟语气句等,必然会使文章出彩。

三、灵活运用过渡词汇

为了使文章整体结构严谨,浑然一体,增强文章的说服力和感染力,考生应该在句子之间、段落之间使用一些过渡性的词语。“有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文紧凑”是书面表达重要的评分依据。考生如能在句与句之间、段与段之间恰到好处地使用一些衔接词和过渡语,会给人以文章结构紧凑、自然流畅之感,从而提高文章的得分档次,不用适当的连接词,往往会出现语言断层现象。比较常见的过渡连接词如下:

①表时间顺序:at first,now,then,later,meanwhile,at last,in the end,before long,for the first time,from then on,since then等。

②表并列关系:not only...but also,both...and...,either...or...,neither...nor...,as well as等。

③表因果关系:as a result,so,therefore,because of,due to,owing to,thanks to等。

④表转折关系:while,but,however,otherwise,yet,al though,though,regardless of,on the contrary,despite,in spite of等。

⑤表解释、说明:that is,that is to say,in other words,namely,such as,for example等。

⑥表列举:first(ly),second(ly),third(ly),last(ly),in the first(second,third)place...

⑦表递进关系:what’s more,what’s worse,to make things worse,besides,in addition,furthermore,in addition,in addition to,worse still,moreover,on the one hand,on the other hard,for one thing,for another thing等。

⑧表总结陈述:to sum up,in a word,in short,in brief,on the whole。

四、避免基本的语法错误

考生要在写作中尽量避免基本的语法错误,不要写不完整的句子,做到时态、语态的运用准确无误,人称指代前后一致,不要在句中突然转换,指代混乱;主语谓语要人称和数上保持一致,名词单复数表达不要弄错,保证动词短语正确,形容词副词不要误用,还有从句中的连词不要搞错,如that,what就经常被学生弄错。

五、注重书写细节

考生在细节上的疏忽也会影响得分低,如书写规范、字母的大小写、标点符号、卷面的整洁、单词拼写,甚至个人的书写习惯会影响得分。另外,作文字数的浮动区间不要超出10个。

短文写作高分攻略 篇3

首先,要明确文章的体裁,是议论文、记叙文、说明文,还是应用文。再决定使用的人称和时态。例如,日记用过去时;说明文、议论文用一般现在时。2010年湖北卷的短文写作是读文写文的新文体,要求举一例子来说明微笑的功能,那么这个例子是自己经历过的,所以用过去时。再如2009年湖北卷要求回一封电子邮件说明两个成语的用法,“‘无所不为’应使用‘无所事事’”应使用一般现在时。而2008年湖北卷,买了一部手机,由于质量问题要求更换,主要用一般过去时,在表达自己的要点时则应穿插一般现在时:Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

二、加强句与句之间的衔接词,掌握基本体裁结构以及段落的常用语句

表示平行、对等或选择关系:and,both ... and,as well as,neither ... nor,either ... or,not only ... but also

表示转折关系:but,yet,however,nevertheless,in spite of,although,otherwise,while

表示对比关系:on the contrary,instead of,on the other hand,just like,unlike,in contrast

表示因果关系:so,for,therefore,as a result,because,owing to,due to,thanks to,on account of,because of

表示递进、强调:furthermore,what’s more,in addition,moreover,worse still, above all, certainly important of all,to make matters worse

表示解释说明关系:namely,actually,such as,for example,for instance,that is to say,in other words, and so on,to tell you the truth,according to this

表示结论:in short,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,as far as I know,on the whole

三、增加文章亮点

除了使用连接词使得行文结构分明,文意贯通,而且还要尽可能采用较高级词汇和短语。例如:

(1)I think/believe ... (一般)

In my opinion/view,personally speaking,as far as I know, as far as I’m concerned(较好)

(2)There are three methods. (一般)

There are three solutions/approaches to this problem. (较好)

(3)New China was founded in 1949. (一般)

1949 saw the founding of new China. (较好)

另外还要会用从句,恰当地运用倒装句、强调句和非谓语动词是提高写作档次最高效的办法。例如:

(1)Yao Ming is a great Chinese basketball player,he is helping the Houston Rockets in the NBA and he has a great skill. (简单句)

Yao Ming, who is a great Chinese basketball player and has a great skill,is helping the Houston Rockets in the NBA. (定语从句)

(2)After he had finished his homework, he went out to have a rest. (状语从句)

Having finished his homework,he went out to have a rest. (分词作状语)

(3)I picked up the book in the shop at the corner.

It was in the shop at the corner that I picked up the book. (强调句型)

(4)When he stayed indoors, the door was closed.

He stayed indoors with the doors closed. (with 的复合结构)

(5)Only then did they realize hey had made a serious mistake. (倒装句)

四、高度重视书写

书写好不一定得高分,但高分者的书写一定美观。书写美观和书写糟糕者至少有3~4分的差距,这是影响英语写作得分的非智力因素中最重要的一点。因此,平时练习时同学们就应该加强书写,给高考作文增加得分点,做到万无一失。

Tips:

议论文常用句式

点明主题:

★ Recently our class has had a heated discussion about whether ...

★ People have adopted different attitudes towards ...

★ People take different views on this question ...

表示赞成与反对:

★ Some of my classmates approve of/are in favor of/agree with/are for/hold the view that/stand for the view that ...

★ The rest of my classmates are against that ... /oppose/object to/hold the opposite view that ...

一般文体常用句式

★ Every coin has two sides.

★ The results are as follows:

★ When it comes to ...

★ There is no doubt that ...

★ There is no denying that ...

★ From the graph/chart above ...

★ A recent survey shows that ...

雅思写作高分短语 篇4

1. a big headache 令人头痛的事情

2. a fraction of 一部分

3. a matter of concern 焦点

4. a series of 一系列,一连串above all 首先,尤其是

5. absent from不在,缺席

6. abundant in富于

7. account for 解释

8. accuse sb. of sth.控告

9. add to增加(add up to)

10. after all 毕竟,究竟

11. agree with同意

12. ahead of time / schedule提前

13. ahead of 在...之前(ahead of time 提前)

14. alien to与...相反

15. all at once 突然,同时

16. all but 几乎;除了...都

17. all of a sudden 突然

18. all over again 再一次,重新

19. all over 遍及

20. all right 令人满意的;可以

21. all the same 仍然,照样的

22. all the time 一直,始终

23. angry with sb. at/about sth.生气,愤怒

24. anxious about/for忧虑,担心

25. anything but 根本不

26. apart from 除...外(有/无)

27. appeal to 吸引,申诉,请求

28. applicable to适用于

29. apply to适用

30. appropriate for/to适当,合适

31. approximate to近似,接近

32. apt at聪明,善于

33. apt to易于

34. around the clock夜以继日

35. as a matter of fact 实际上

36. as a result(of) 因此,由于

37. as a rule 通常,照例

38. as far as ...be concerned 就...而言

39. as far as 远至,到...程度

40. as follows 如下

41. as for 至于,关于

42. as good as 和...几乎一样

43. as if 好像,防腐 (感谢关注英语口语精华)

44. as regards 关于,至于

45. as to 至于,关于

46. as usual 像平常一样,照例

47. as well as 除...外(也),即...又

48. as well 同样,也,还

49. ashamed of羞愧,害臊

雅思写作常用短语 篇5

The remarkable improvement/steady growth of people’s living standard advanced science and technology be faced with new opportunities and challenges it is commonly believed/recognized that arouse wide public concern/draw public attention it is undeniable that/there is denying that a controversial issue Reach an absolute consensus onbe supported by sound reasons argument on both sides play an increasingly important role inBe indispensable toadvantages far outweigh the disadvantages lead to/give rise to/contribute to /result incomplicated social phenomenon sense of responsibility/sense of achievement sense of competition and cooperation

widen one’s horizon/broaden one’s vision

Acquire knowledge and skills take many factors into account/consideration from another perspective make joint efforts be beneficial/conducive to

has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones Take the essence and discard the dregs.do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental toexchange ideas/ emotions/ information

keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of … take effective measures to do sth.the healthy development of …

Every coin has its two sides.Views on …vary from person to person.attach great importance to…

social status

focus time and energy on…

expand one’s scope of knowledge

both physically and mentally

be directly / indirectly related to…

believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that relieve stress/ burdengive(top)priority to sth.compared with…/ in comparison with

in contrast / on the contrary.replace/ substitute / take the place ofoffer job opportunitiesmirror of social progress

Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…

雅思写作高分 篇6

It is easy to explain why children are facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Firstly, although as parents there are few pleasures greater than their children succeeding at school, sometimes the pressure is way too much. Parents’ unrealistically high expectations can backfire severely and end up causing their children to be unhappy. Secondly, all children have to face peer pressure in school, which is generally beneficial to kids’ growth, yet the ugly reality is that peer pressure reaches its highest intensity at just the age when children tend to be so insensitive, unkind, and even cruel as to purposefully make others unhappy. Thirdly, children are easily affected by advertising that attracts them to buy things they cannot possibly afford, and as a result, they may feel unhappy.

Though it is never easy to fix these feelings of unhappiness, there are possible measures to be taken to enhance the wellbeing of children who are under constant pressures. To begin with, parents have to draw a line on the expectations of their children and find out their true potentials, rather than pushing them to unrealistic limits. Meanwhile, with patience and guidance, parents should keep an eye on their children who fall victims to online pressure through social networking. Simultaneously, the authorities should do more to regulate advertising that are intended for children who are anxious to buy unnecessary things.

In conclusion, there are no easy solutions to the increasing academic, social, and commercial pressures children face today. Frankly, I am quite pessimistic because those factors that bring pressures to children are not likely to go away, at least in the foreseeable future.

雅思写作高分表达

Point at 指向......

Perspective 角度

Reduce 减少;减轻

Pleasure 快乐;愉悦

Way too much 太过了

Unrealistically 不切实际地

Backfire 回火;事与愿违

End up 最终落得个......

Peer pressure 同龄人压力

Intensity 强度

Purposefully 有意地

Afford 负担得起

Fix 解决

Enhance 提高

Constant 长期的

Potential 潜力(的)

Keep an eye on... 关注......

Fall victim to... 沦为......的牺牲品

Simultaneously 同时

Frankly 坦白地说

Pessimistic 悲观的

雅思写作高分短语 篇7

一、提高认识, 端正态度

由于诸多客观原因, 农村中小学未开设或虽开设了写字课, 可写字课却成了老师们提高基础学科教学成绩的辅助课。七年级大部分新生的作业、考卷错别字多, 书写乱画, 字迹难以辨认, 颇令各科老师头疼。为此, 指导教师要向考生说明:1.2000年10月31日第九届全国人民代表大会常务委员会十八次会议通过《中华人民共和国国家通用语言文字法》, 该法强调学校及其他教育机构通过语文课程教授规范汉字。2《.全日制义务教育语文课程标准》也强调:考生要养成正确的写字姿势和良好的写字习惯, 书写要规范、端正、整洁。3.书写在语文考试作文题中占一定的分值, 中考作文题中书写占5分。

通过教师的强调, 考生提高了认识, 端正了学习态度, 有了写好字的强烈欲望, 教师就容易进行下步工作了。

二、规范姿势, 掌握方法

大部分农村考生由于在小学没有进行过正规的书写训练, 因而书写姿势、握笔方法错误各异。指导教师应要求学生:

1.坐姿。学生书写坐姿为“头正、身直、足安 (即两脚张开与肩同宽, 自然放在地上) ”。

2.选笔。大部分学生喜用中性笔, 可选0.5mm黑色中性笔, 钢笔变选弹性好, 书写手感舒适, 笔锋有力的金尖钢笔。

3.做到“三个一”。拇指、食指、中指指尖一抵二压呈三角形捏住笔杆 (其中, 中指使用指甲内侧) , 拇指与笔杆接触的位置距笔尖约四厘米 (一寸左右) , 无名指和小指抵住中指, 起协调控制作用;眼睛距离桌面一尺;胸口距离桌边一拳。

4.角度。书写时笔杆与纸面呈45度。

三、选好字帖, 掌握笔画

教师应替学生精选一种汉字结构紧凑, 字体美观的楷书字帖临习, 如庞中华、顾仲安、史小波、田英章等钢笔书法家的字帖皆适合学生临习。可用米字格纸临习汉字, 能较快掌握汉字结构。

怎样临帖呢?临帖的最好方法是:读帖———摹帖———临帖——背帖。读是为摹和临作准备, 而摹和临则是以读为基础, 摹和临的阶段应称之为画字, 即把帖中字的结构与笔画画像, 细心揣摩其组合要领。经过反复临摹并在脑中对所临字形成深刻的印象, 就可进入背帖阶段, 这时帖中之字就成为考生手中所写的字了。

临帖时, 从楷书的点、横、竖、撇、捺、钩、折等基本笔画入手, 它们是构成楷书的基本要素, 如同一台机器的组成零件, 只有每个零件质量过关, 组装的机器才具有良好的性能。因此, 必须练好这些基本笔画。

如写“丶”。要领:入笔轻, 行笔略用力, 收笔时顿笔、回带。此“丶”写好, 点中的左点、右点、长点自然而成。

四、掌握结构, 提高笔画

学生在基本掌握笔画的书写技法后, 教师就可以引导他们转入对汉字结构的学习。为让考生较快掌握汉字结构, 可把常用汉字编成如下顺口溜:

疏密匀称“禹”“承”“我”,

全包围“目”“四”“回”“国”,

左窄中右宽“彻”“做”,

左下包围“越”“题”“过”,

上小下大“吴”“最”“若”。

均衡左右“平”“中”“半”,

长短适宜“农”“未”“天”,

中宽上下窄“察”“蕃”,

中宽左右窄“御”“衔”,

同类组合变化“炎”,

左中窄右宽“鸿”“锻”,

中窄左右宽“辨”“班”,

变化参差“主”“垂”“川”,

变化参差“主”“垂”“川”,

斜正自然“长”“戈”“言”,

上下相等“皇”“悲”“男”,

双包围“寇”“包”“色”“冠”。

左右相等“韩”“朝”“顾”,

左中右等“翔”“粥”“糊”,

左上包围“房”“危”“度”,

左窄右宽“何”“现”“物”。

左宽又窄“彩”“断”“刻”,

点画呼应“心”“知”“乐”,

上宽下窄“势”“资”“者”,

中窄上下宽“靠”“寄”,

左长又短“杜”“知”“和”。

左短右长“难”“冰”“峰”,

上包下“阅”“问”“同”“凤”,

同类组合“竹”“林”“朋”。

上窄下宽“臭”“盖”“集”,

左上包围“成”“或”“戚”,

左上包围“成”“或”

上中下等“莫”“慧”“意”,

上窄中下宽“曼”“鼻”,

上大下小“圣”“坚”“基”。

教师先要求学生熟记顺口溜, 然后再教学。教学时, 要充分利用“米”字格的优势教学。如教学“朝”字 (左右相等“韩”“朝”“顾”) , 朝属左右结构, 朝的左右偏旁分列米字格中线两边, 左偏旁让右偏旁, 左偏旁的“十”、“早”各占上下比例的三分之一和三分之二, 右边的“月”字一撇应自然, 月中的两横应靠近在米字格右部分横中线的上下两旁。除此法外, 还可借助长方形、正方形、三角形、梯形等图形来掌握汉字的结构。

学生练习掌握汉字结构的同时, 也加强了笔画的练习, 时间一长, 学生汉字结构的掌握, 笔画的书写能力就会同时提高。

五、循序渐进, 不断提高俗话说:“冰冻三尺, 非一日之寒。”根据学校没有开设写字课的实际情况, 教师每周可抽 20 分钟左右的时间教考生写字。教学中:1.不少学生在学了正确的写字姿势和执笔方法后, 极易产生反弹现象。此时, 教师应严格督促。不久, 考生的良好习惯就养成了。2.练习写字时, 无论什么笔画, 哪怕是最简单的“丶”, 也要严格按照起笔、行笔、收笔三个步骤来书写。如写“一”字, 起笔顿笔, 然后行笔, 行笔时力度由重到轻, 至中部后, 力度又由轻转重, 至末端顿笔后收笔。教师在巡视考生临帖时, 注意多向考生作示范。3.学生每天临习汉字不宜贪多, 一般以三至五个为宜, 而且要学以致用。平时作业、笔记、答卷等书写, 下笔前必先对所临之字形做到“胸有成竹”, 方能下笔。不仅如此, 学生的作业教师须勤收勤改, 发现问题及时纠正。如此持之以恒, 学生长进必快。

在此基础上, 教师平时的板书, 尽量多写楷书, 给学生一个标准的“字帖”。如遇纠错别字, 教师又可给学生讲析汉字的书写及结构要领, 以加深学生对该字的印象。

除此之外, 教师要在业余时间做汉字书写练习及书法作品鉴赏活动, 以提高自己指导学生书写汉字及创作的能力, 还可在班上开展小型硬笔书法竞赛活动, 给予获奖者物质和精神奖励。最好能在班上掀起一股写字热, 若遇学校或上级行政部门开展硬笔书法竞赛活动, 教师应积极组织考生参加, 以提高考生书写汉字的兴趣及动力。

自七年级新生入学开始, 教师即对新生进行写字教学。一段时间后将会发现, 学生的作业、考卷书写规范、整洁了, 各科任教师反映也好了, 尤其是在期末统考中, 学生写作成绩可以普遍提高3~5分, 一定程度上又增强了师生书写工作的动力。

高中英语写作高分技巧 篇8

关键词: 高中英语 写作应试 高分技巧

中国自加入WTO后国际竞争力越来越强,这就对中国人的英语写作水平提出了更高的要求。在高中英语学习阶段,考试试题中的英语写作为25分,占整个试卷分值(150分)的1/6。这个部分既是学生容易得分又最容易失分的地方。因此,学生在掌握正确的英语写作步骤的同时,掌握英语写作的高分技巧显得更有必要。

首先,无论写什么样的文章,都不能离开文章的主题。主题是文章所要表达的中心,是文章的灵魂。如果审不清主题,就有可能出现“下笔千言,离题万里”的情况。因此,审好题是英语写作得高分的前提和基础。其次,提纲是文章的基本框架,是执笔行文时的依据,提纲直接关系到文章的质量。写文章之前列一个提纲是个非常好的写作习惯,不但可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序,而且可以紧扣文章主题不跑题。再次,确定好文章中心后,列好提纲,方可动笔写作。在写作过程中,如果仅仅局限在把内容交代清楚上,只选用一些普通的、平淡的或者一律使用简单句平铺直叙,那么写出来的文章就像白开水一样平淡无味。要想把文章写得优美,耐人寻味,有深度,就要尝试使用一些高级词汇或复杂句型,凸显文章的亮点,给文章增添色彩。

1.尽量在英语写作中使用一些高级词汇、词组、习语等。

We saw (witnessed) an accident yeaterday.

I have no money (can’t afford) to buy it.

2.既求达又求雅已经成为高考书面表达的高分评判依据之一。

要避免单调、呆板的句子,尽量丰富、灵活地使用不同的句式,尤其经典句型力求多记忆、多运用。句式灵活多变使文章生动、活泼、流畅,更能够体现较强的书面表达能力。

①使用复合句:I hope that kind of activity will continue in the future. (宾语从句)

As a student,I’m strongly for the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. (状语从句)

The activity,which is intended to promote friendship and encourage economy,is highly praised and supported by the teachers and students in our school. (定语从句)

②使用it句型:It is said that one third of the graduates of this university haven’t found a job so far.

It is necessary for you lock the car when you do not use it.

③使用倒装句、强调句、虚拟语气等:Only in this way can you hope to make improvements in the operating system.

It was what the headmaster said at the meeting that really surprised us.

If it had not been for your advice, I really don’t know what should have done.

④使用独立主格结构、分词结构、动名词、不定式:The football math (being) over,crowds of people poured out into the street.(独立主格结构)

Tom’s being late for school made the teacher angry. (动名词短语作定语)

3.恰到好处使用一些过渡性词汇。

语句间的连接词能起到穿针引线的作用,使文章结构紧凑,上下连贯,自然流畅。语言的连贯性主要表现在文章的内部的内容之间的因果、递进、并列等的关系上。过渡性词汇主要以连词为主,同时有很多副词和介词短语,我们平时要熟记并运用好这些过渡词。

①表示时间的过渡性词语:first, then, next, finally; firstly, secondly... finally; for one thing, for another; on one hand, on the other hand; in the past, at present, in the future; in the end, at last; recently, after a while, at first, all of a sudden.

②表示空间的过渡性词语:on the right/left; on one side of... on the other side of; at the foot/top/end of; in the middle/center of; in front of; at the back of; next to.

③表示递进的过渡性词语:what’s more; moreover; furthermore; besides; in addition to; to make things worse; still; also; not only...but also...; even; as well; the most important of all; worst of all; especially; in particular.

④表示解释说明的过渡性词语:for example, for instance, such as, that is, in other words, in this/that case, in fact, actually, personally, and so on.

⑤表示并列转折关系的过渡性词语:and, or, but, yet, however, while, otherwise, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, after all, instead of .

⑥表示条件关系的过渡性词语:as(so)long as, on condition that, if, unless, once.

⑦表示因果关系的过渡性词语:because, because of; for, now that; thanks to...; due to...; as a result(of); one reason is that ..., another reason is that; for one reason, for another reason; therefore; so; thus

⑧表示让步关系的过渡性词语:as, even if, even though, whether... or...

⑨表示强调的过渡语:indeed, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all.

⑩表示概括归纳的过渡性词语:in a word, in short, generally speaking, as far as I know, as we know, on the whole.

4.对原文进行一定的修改。

要提高英语写作水平,除了准确的遣词造句、严谨布局外,文章的修改也是很重要的一步。文章写好后,要经过反复修改润色,才能够措辞准确,句子流畅,布局严谨,因此,修改文章是提高英语写作水平的有效方法。

修改文章时要做到六看:看体裁和格式是否正确,看要点是否齐全,看时态是否一致,看主谓是否一致,看人称是否一致,看句子结构是否完整。

5.书写要规范,卷面要整洁。

高考英语写作是人工阅卷,整洁的卷面、漂亮的书写会给阅卷老师留下一个良好的印象,是一篇文章得高分的前提。所以,我们在英文写作时,一定要注意避免标点符号使用不规范,字母大小写随意,字迹潦草不清,卷面乱涂乱画,随意抄袭试卷中的阅读理解等,这些会导致低分情况出现。

雅思写作高分 篇9

你在多大程度上同意或不同意下面的说法?广告通常鼓励消费者大量购买产品或服务,而不是提高其质量。给出你回答的理由,并举出任何来自你自己的知识或经验的例子。

Advertising is the life of trade as suppliers want to sell things in quantity; however, the success or failure of every advertisement eventually depends on the quality of a product or service. It may be said that a bad investment is going for quantity over quality, without being aware that customers are becoming more careful with their wallets, especi

Although advertising is the most effective way to encourage mass consumption, particularly if the goods are cheap and worthless, the bitterness of poor quality is remembered long after the sweetness of low pricing is forgotten. In a certain way, quality is like cooking, and you cannot fake good quality any more than you can fake a good meal.

虽然广告是鼓励大众消费最有效的方法,特别是如果商品便宜且毫无价值的话,但人们在忘掉低价的甜蜜之后很久就会记住质量差的苦涩。在某种程度上,质量就像烹饪,你不能伪造好质量比你可以假装一顿美餐。

In conclusion, just because quality is more important than quantity, it does not mean that advertising does not play a decisive role in influencing the public mind. The point is that consumers have now become more prudent in spending behaviors and hence are no longer as penny-wise and quality-foolish as before. In all events, suppliers should continue investing in advertising their quality products because, if they stop advertising to save money, it would be as stupid as stopping the clock to save time.

总之,仅仅因为质量比数量更重要,并不意味着广告在影响公众心态方面没有起到决定性的作用。关键是,消费者现在在消费行为上变得更加谨慎,因此不再像以前那样精打细算、质量愚蠢。无论如何,供应商应该继续投资于为他们的优质产品做广告,因为如果他们停止做广告以节省金钱,那就像停止做钟表以节省时间一样愚蠢。

ally with the sluggish economy right now. While quality sounds hard to define, you know that it is quality rather than quantity that matters.

广告是贸易的生命,因为供应商想大量销售商品;然而,每个广告的成功与否最终取决于产品或服务的质量。可以说,一个糟糕的投资是追求数量而不是质量,而没有意识到消费者正在更加小心他们的钱包,特别是现在经济不景气。虽然质量听起来很难定义,但重要的是质量而不是数量。

The greatest thing to be achieved in advertising is believably, and nothing is more believable than the product itself. So, the most powerful element in advertising is the truth, not half lying. For example, a huge advertising campaign will make a bad product fail faster because it will certainly get more people to know that it is bad.

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